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Bridge of Trust

[media-credit name=”Courtesy of Creative Commons” align=”alignleft” width=”158″][/media-credit]Dark the night shall fall

She lies in endless sleep

In your mind you’ve gone too deep

Listen to me son of flame

We call you fire

The one you call friend is a liar

You’ll lose the one who matters most in the end.

By Kaden Kern (my son, 12 years-old)

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  • Ah I love it, Katy! Short, but powerful! I can’t wait to read more by Kaden 🙂

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    • Thanks TJ -- Yep proud mama. I asked his permission to post it. He will be excited to see it here. Got to get the young writers on here. 🙂

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      • You’re so right about the young writers!! So happy he saw the comments too 🙂

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        • 🙂

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  • Cher Duncombe

    Katy, this really is powerful! I know how proud you must be. I hope Kaden sees everyone’s comments. 🙂

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    • Very proud, Cher! VERY!! 🙂

      Yes, he’s seen the comments -- HUGE smile 😀

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  • Unky F

    Great work, Kaden. Keep it up.

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    • Unky Frank:

      Kaden LOVES that you commented here. Made him SO happy! 🙂

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  • WHAT THE? Your kid is a better poet at 12 than I’ll be in my whole life!

    You must be one proud mama 🙂

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    • Proud hardly covers it, Jen. He’s remarkable! And yeah, I have no ability to write like this -- can’t wait to see what he will write next and over the decades. 🙂

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  • Katy,

    Thanks for sharing this burst of creativity and mystery by your son! I hope he keeps writing and you keep sharing.

    Thanks again,

    Larry

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    • Thank you, Larry.

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